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The Demon Within by ~Death-By-Emotion:iconDeath-By-Emotion:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


This demon lies deep within
But break its chains it shall begin
To rip your flesh and tear your skin
A Vicious smirk and blood stained grin
With fangs and claws that drip with sin
My demon lying deep within...
©2008-2009 ~Death-By-Emotion
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Submitted: May 25, 2008
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My second poem writen in 5 minutes
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~autumn-cannibal:iconautumn-cannibal: May 25, 2008, 8:39:19 AM
Wow, for 5 minutes this is very impressive, very poignant. Well done

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Cruciatus Animus, Pius Vates
~Death-By-Emotion:iconDeath-By-Emotion: May 25, 2008, 10:15:18 AM
Thank you very much. it goes with a photograph of mine that i have in my gallery somewhere haha. i see your a fellow bassist are you part of a band?
~autumn-cannibal:iconautumn-cannibal: May 25, 2008, 11:10:18 AM
Sadly no, friends who have started bands and asked me to join have come and gone, but I can often be found to be playing with a few guitarist mates. What about you?

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Cruciatus Animus, Pius Vates
~Death-By-Emotion:iconDeath-By-Emotion: May 25, 2008, 11:25:39 AM
No but im really trying to find one i just struggle to find a complete band that plays the music i enjoy hey. perhaps after exams il get better luck
~autumn-cannibal:iconautumn-cannibal: May 25, 2008, 4:23:48 PM
Yeah, im hoping to find something like that when i head off to uni in september

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Cruciatus Animus, Pius Vates
~Death-By-Emotion:iconDeath-By-Emotion: May 26, 2008, 4:40:44 AM
Thats great i hope it works out
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